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Jane Doe 2022 LF Power Hitter 15 HR's .587 Batting Average All State

 

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Dear Coach Benjamin,

 

After researching the Southern Utah University softball program I noticed you will be graduating 3 outfielders in 2022.  I wanted to express my interest in your program and let you know based on my athletic ability, personality, and great attitude that I can help you replace those outfielders graduating.

 

I play for the Vista Bombers travel team out of Vista, California.  I also play for Vista High School where I was named All State as a Junior and lead our team with 15 HR's and a .587 batting average.  

 

I noticed in your Bio that you have been at SUU for two years and in each year the team has performed better than before you arrived.  You have made the conference playoffs and increased the winning percentage in both seasons.  I want to play for a program that is continuing to improve and has a chance to win the conference tournament and play in an NCAA regional.  My skills as a power hitting left fielder would help boost your line up.  

 

Based on my attached skills video and profile, would I be a player and person that fits what you're looking for in a recruit?  I look forward to hearing back from you with any information you can provide me.

 

Sincerely,

 

 

Jane Doe